Tuesday, March 30, 2010

What this is amazing crazy?

In Albertsons,
a pack of batteries fell,
burst open,
some rolling on the ground.

Outside,
a man walking by,
spit on the ground,
and a cool night breeze blew through my hair.
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3 comments:

  1. BRUIT.FLOW (admin)April 16, 2010 at 2:26 PM

    I wanted
    to say something
    some time
    ago but
    I can't
    remember so
    I'll say this

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  2. Emily ThibodeauxApril 18, 2010 at 5:19 PM

    are these haikus?

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  3. mattApril 23, 2010 at 11:23 AM

    No, this is not a haiku, it is a Zen poem: the mundane, when truly noticed, is realized as the profound.

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